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Hey there abused and sitting in the corner
I'm here to fix this so don't feel like a loner
Here let me lift you up
Dust you off and give your wounds a cleanup
I'll punish him up for everything he's done to you
Just keep your head up and you'll pull through

From the darkest day to the coldest night
I'll take your beatings to set things right
I won't give up on you because for you I will fight
Even battered and bruised I'll give it all my might

Hey there cutter holding a piece of glass
Why is it always your wrists you harass?
You want to end it all as you hate your life
But salvation won't found at the end of a knife
Just give me time to fix this mess around you
So you can wake up to life with a positive view
  
From the darkest day to the coldest night
I'll cut and bleed for you to set things right
I won't give up on you because for you I will fight
Even bloodless and scared I'll give it all my might

Hey there addict looking for you next fix
Is there no hope for you even wearing that crucifix?
If God is taking a break from you I promise I won't
When you hunger and want to give in please don't
Let me be your daily dose
Take this itching craving and bring it to a close

From the darkest day to the coldest night
I'll be your sustenance to set things right
I won't give up on you because for you I will fight
Even fiending and addicted I'll give it all my might
Written by Mobis-New-Nest

These are other literature deviations I have done like the one above. Some are poems others are short stories, I also a guide to writing short stories for those who are new at writing:
Dan: [link]
Push: [link]
Pretend: [link]
Stand: [link]
Puppet: [link]
Fight: [link]
Endure: [link]

Following Wiespers: [link]

Pink Swear: [link]
In The Rain: [link]
Taken: [link]
Advice: [link]
Broken: [link]
Mobis Love Story…GAG: [link]
Damnation: [link]
Feelings: [link]
Ache: [link]
Sacrifice: [link]
Moms Car: [link]
Hate: [link]
I’m thinking Kingdom Hearts: [link]
Journey: [link]
Kingdom Bleach a dead fan fiction: [link]
The recipe that is you: [link]
My Angel in Red: [link]
In this corner versus life: [link]
Fiction Versus Reality: [link]
Gentile: [link]
Tragedy: [link]
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BlackBlockSwindle Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013   Artist
This was so beautiful...
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Mobis-New-Nest Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Why thank you. I really appreciate that.
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Sweet-Kaitou Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011  Student Writer
Very nice and well written. :)
Do you know the artist for the little pic? owo
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Black---Diamond Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2010
Wow. Awesome.
You have a talent
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Mobis-New-Nest Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you, I try and step away from doing art work and really get down to literature pieces :)
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Black---Diamond Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2010
Good on you ^^
Its great :)
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longhorns-fan Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010
Wow, this is really good. Some great imagery, and if flows well. Great write. Almost sounds like it could be a song, or like a song could be written to go with it.
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Mobis-New-Nest Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you I'm glad you do, I don't really get a lot of comments on my literature pieces but I'm glad you like many others are recognizing my pieces. Peace love and so much happyness to you :)
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tomboy016 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2010
I love this poem. It describes everything I want.
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Mobis-New-Nest Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you I'm glad you do, I don't really get a lot of comments on my literature pieces but I'm glad you like many others are recognizing my pieces. Peace love and so much happyness to you :)
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