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You're not alone
You're not alone
I'll hold your hand
You're not alone
Let my words be your shield
So that you will never ever yield
I know you've made some mistakes
But life is something you can't forsake
You're not alone
You're not alone
I'll hold your hand
You're not alone

I know it's been so long
Now I've never felt so strong
And you're the one that made it right
So now I know I can fight

I remember losing my mind
The world was so unkind
To many snakes in the grass
People lying and cheating me
While backbit my ass
Another day, another dawn
Yet to me today feels like yesterday's wrongs
Sometimes I feel like the pain is to strong
Like you want to give up and pill the trigger
Because just trying is hard and waiting is to long
So most the time in this game of life I wanted to fold
Yet people saying just keep your head up and try again is all I was told
How can you when you everyone around you is so cold
But we're so focused on the bad that we're told
That we forget that ones who try and make every dark moment bright
The one that tries to always make us feel right
You know the one who loves us and gives us plight

You're not alone
You're not alone
I'll hold your hand
You're not alone
Let my words be your shield
So that you will never ever yield
I know you've made some mistakes
But life is something you can't forsake
You're not alone
You're not alone
I'll hold your hand
You're not alone

I hate when people say 'just walk away'
You think it's easy when you have
A crowd blocking your way
People chanting for you to fight
But you loose and come to bruises every night
So you go on and wear a smile
Pretending everything's alright
All the while deep down you feel vile
So the tears come pouring
So you reach for your addiction
Inject it and your mind starts soaring
But when the rush is done
That's when people will look at you and shun
So if you're tired of feeling blue
Tried of tears streaming down
Tired of being treated like a clown
It's time to pick yourself up off the ground
Just know that someone's always here for you
So when you have to atone
Remember that you're not alone

You're not alone
You're not alone
I'll hold your hand
You're not alone
Let my words be your shield
So that you will never ever yield
I know you've made some mistakes
But life is something you can't forsake
You're not alone
You're not alone
I'll hold your hand
You're not alone
Just getting back into poetry. Please let me know what you think and what could use changing please.
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shinuXIII Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student General Artist
That pic (and poem) slightly reminds me of Kingdom Hearts. You ever try to publish your stuff. I mean deviantart is good, but live publishing might help a little.
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Zimario97 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This was incredibly powerful and inspiring! I absolutely loved it! Well done again, Mobis :clap: It gave a glimpse into the life of someone in such a bad place, and the glimpse enlightens greatly.
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nora038 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Heart warming and not, but life is layed out right on that page. Glad to hear ur dad is ok.
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fractal2cry Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
whats the status w/ur dad!?
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Mobis-New-Nest Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
HE called my sister lastnight so things have been alright, at least we know he's safe...
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fractal2cry Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
perfect great news!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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